面对雅思大作文开头段，你有freestyle吗？--Emma

　　面对雅思大作文开头段，你有freestyle吗？--Emma
　　Well begun is half done. 宝宝们都知道，想要雅思大作文拿，首当其冲的当然是引人入胜的开头段。然而大部分宝宝，受应试教育的影响，在雅思大作文写作过程中，尤其是开头段，过于依靠模板，结果写出的作文千篇一律，与失之交臂。其实，雅思6分作文的核心在于逻辑通顺，语法基本正确，而7分及以上的作文不仅要表达无误，还要写出具备个人特色的freestyle。那么，今天就为大家分享一下如何给你的雅思大作文一个充满freestyle的开头段。
　　首先，争取避免以下开头模板：
　　(1) With the development of...
　　(2) Nowadays there is a heated topic about...
　　(3) When it comes to..., different people have different views... Some people think..., but others think...
　　(4) When asked about..., many people think...
　　以上模板都属于考官比较厌恶的陈词滥调，以它们开头的作文，印象分会大大降低。
　　其次，要有“描写问题/现象”的意识，而不是简单“提出问题”：
　　（1）引用电视或文学作品描写现象+拟论证的问题
　　真题①
　　Some people believe there are intelligent life forms existing on other planets and it is better to send messages to them, but others think it is a bad idea because it is very dangerous to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
　　学生开头
　　Nowadays, there is a heated topic about whether we should send messages to intelligent life on other plants. Some people believe that we should do that, but others suspect that doing that is very dangerous.（模板开头法）
　　范文参考
　　Our imagination about beings on other planets has never stopped and reached its climax in such movie series like “Star Wars” and “Star Trek” in 1960s and 1970s. If other life forms do exist, an idea I strongly support, should we, as human beings on the Earth, try to reach out and communicate with them? （freestyle个性开头法）
　　【评】开始即描述我们对外星人的想象，并引出了《星球大战》这样具体个性化的电视节目，然后提出是否应该与外星人联系这个问题。与平淡无味的模板相比，其优势显而易见。
　　（2）以叙述方式描写现象+拟批驳的靶子
　　真题②
　　Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, but others believe government should control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
　　学生开头
　　When it comes to the issue about the use of fresh water, some people argue that they are entitled to consume fresh water without limitation, but others believe that the use of fresh water should be controlled by governments strictly.（模板开头法）
　　范文参考
　　We all, humans and non-humans alike, need fresh water for our survival. The issue is that a lot of people always try to make a case for their wasteful use of fresh water, arguing that they have money, and more importantly right to buy and use as much fresh water as they want. Their constant rhetoric is something like, “so what? Don’t worry, for we have enough fresh water! ”（freestyle个性开头法）
　　【评】先从我们需要淡水开始，然后以叙述的方式提出有些人的错误观点，这样开头比模板开头生动不少。
　　（3）用数据描写现象+引出双方观点
　　真题③
　　More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?
　　范文参考
　　Just 50 years ago, to own a car was quite a luxury, but today, cars have found their way into many households. Statistics show in China alone, there are over 140 million cars running on road every day. While cars have brought about conveniences to their users, they have imposed great pressure on the environment.（freestyle个性开头法）
　　【评】引用具体个性化的数据来描写现象，比枯燥的辞藻更具说服力。
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